Some great comparisons here. Just remember to be using film language, talking about the technical / narrative conventions and identifying in what ways you challenged, used and developed these codes and conventions. Having sub-headings, giving a clear description of the convention challenged, then talking about the difference/ similarities between the 2 videos and to what extent you developed these conventions and codes, would have been an improvement on an already good assignment.
Hi Kayla
ReplyDeleteSome great comparisons here. Just remember to be using film language, talking about the technical / narrative conventions and identifying in what ways you challenged, used and developed these codes and conventions.
Having sub-headings, giving a clear description of the convention challenged, then talking about the difference/ similarities between the 2 videos and to what extent you developed these conventions and codes, would have been an improvement on an already good assignment.
Overall Score: 18/20
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