Location by Kayla Lockington
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Questions: 1. What are some of the points this article raises between the difference in how progressive the TV representation of Maori is an...
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Concept Practicalities How realistic is your idea? Our idea in my opinion matches the theme of the song. By having an emotional storyline ...
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ReplyDeleteHi Kayla
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Great overall planning. You have communicated a clear Vision of where you are heading and how you intend to do that.
Your part of the research is well-done.
It would be good to have you thinking about location in terms of setting, like was mentioned last year, as another character. Thinking not just about practicalities but significance of a home, (you did this with the cemetery to an extent), a dark night etc. Having that extra layer of breaking down the meaning in every decision just adds another layer of depth and shows deeper understanding for your choices.
I love the idea for your video and I think there's a lot you can do in terms of representation (age / gender) and looking at broader contexts.
For now, I would focus in on getting a real rhythm for each of the elements of your narrative so they have a coherence in each of the different film apsects (main character as an older girl / the child scenes at the house, etc). Make them all really different but with a distinguishable style as you need some coherency (something to bring it all together) so all the different aspects don't feel disjointed.
Please label each post as it gets a bit tricky to find the bits that belong together. Making all your planning under 1 post / heading would have been more helpful.
Looks good to me though :)
A few tips for next time:
- try to keep work easy to follow with well-labelled blog tools so it isn't all over the place with lots of text and lots to read through (bullet points on blog tools / lots of imagery etc)
- Brainstorm & Moodboard are missing from your page. This needs to go up please
- Need to keep including other music videos that are your 'inspiration' for your creative choices. Especially in planning phase.